The Pepsi-Cola slogan “come alive” almost appeared in an ad in the Chinese issue of the “Reader’s Digest” as “Pepsi brings your ancestors back from the grave”.
[原译]百事可乐的广告用语“活跃起来”登在《读者文摘》中文版的一幅广告中时几乎成了“百事可乐把您的祖先从坟墓里召回”。(《英语世界》,1983年第5期)
我觉得原译文不大对劲,但又说不清楚,请分析。
先从译文本身来看,既然百事可乐的广告用语已经刊登在《读者文摘》中文版的广告上,那么这个中文广告已经成了一个既成事实。广告登成什么样子,就是什么样子,怎么还能说“几乎成了……”呢?
再从英语原文来看, almost 说明动词时, 常常表示眼看就要发生而事实上并未发生的事, 其词义相当于 just about but not。例如:
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I almost fell off my bike. 我差点儿(没)从自行车上摔下来。(事实上没摔下来)
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He was almost drowned. 他差点儿(没)淹死。(事实上没淹死)
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Langdon and Teabing almost jumped to their feet. (Dan Brown, The Da Vinci Code) 兰登和提彬紧张得差点要跳起来。(事实上没跳起来) (《达·芬奇密码》)
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The boy almost wept every time he was scolded( = He did not actually weep). 那孩子每次受到责骂时差不多都要哭。(实际上没有哭)
试比较:The boy wept almost every time he was scolded(He did not weep every time). 那孩子差不多每次受到责骂时都哭了。(实际上哭了,但不是每次都哭了)
I almost didn't meet him. 我差点没见到他。(事实上见到了)
应当指出的是,在翻译这类句子时,如果英语动词所表达的内容是不希望发生的事,则译成汉语动词的肯定式或否定式,有时候意思是一样的,也就是说,“几乎”(“差点儿”)跟“几乎不”(“差点儿不”)是一个意思。如果英语动词所表达的内容是希望发生的事,则“几乎”(“差点儿”)和“几乎不”(“差点不”)意思是相反的。拿例6来说,“我差点儿遇见他”(事实上没有遇见),跟“我差点儿没遇见他”(事实上遇见了),意思正好相反。再如,“我差点儿考上大学。”跟“我差点儿没考上大学”,意思也正好相反。
[试译]百事可乐的广告用语“活跃起来”被译成中文“百事可乐把您的祖先从坟墓里召回”,差点儿(没)刊登在《读者文摘》中文版上的一幅广告中。
nearly 也具有此种含义, 见 nearly/almost。
请做下面的英语试题:
- "Was the test hard?" "The test was so hard that he ____ flunked it."
A. mostly B. most C. almost D. about(TOEFL)
- He ____ when the bus came to a sudden stop. A. was almost hurt B. was hurt himself C. was to hurt himself D. was hurting himself(全国四级,91.6-70)